Katie Long meets Eric Kimura at a wedding that her sister is catering. The original plan was for Katie to keep an eye on Eric. You see, Eric is a rising star in legal circles and is planning to make a run for prosecutor. He attends his ex-girlfriend's wedding to show the world that he's totally fine with her wedding. The truth is though, he loved Deana, and he's crushed that she's marrying someone else. So when he sees a hot, young waitress looking at him at the wedding, one things leads to another and next thing you know, they're in the bathroom having the hottest encounter he's ever had.Eric walks away from the encounter feeling awful. He doesn't even know the girl's name. He's a gentleman, and he certainly didn't treat this girl like one. He decides to track her down, apologize, and also, make clear that he's running for office, and this little detail could really hurt his campaign. When he tracks Katie down, he apologizes, but also realizes that this woman sparks feelings and desire in him like he's never experienced.
For her part, Katie took the gig watching Eric because she needs money to go to school. She's been a trainwreck most of her life, forcing her responsible older sister to bail her out of different situations she's gotten herself into. But she's decided to turn over a new leaf. No more hairbrained schemes. No more hanging with the wrong people. Just school and finally getting her life back on track. The money she earns reporting on Eric's movements during the wedding will help her do this. Of course, she doesn't count on a sexual encounter happening with the mark himself at the wedding. But Katie figures she doesn't need to tell her employer that she had hot steamy sex with Eric at the wedding. She can just unequivocally tell her employer that Eric did not have any contact with the bride. But when Eric shows up at the catering shop the next day, Katie is thrown for a loop. Not only do they have incendiary chemistry, but she met him under false pretenses. How will she come clean with him about it? And when he finds out, will he be furious?
I'm on the fence about this book. I like Eric quite a bit. He's a good guy. He's ambitious enough to run for office, but also knows who his friends are, and he really seems to care for Katie. He's not just worried about the news of his and Katie's liaison at the wedding, but he genuinely feels awful about not even getting her name after having hot sex with her. He's a nice guy, and as he gets to know Katie, he discovers that he'd really like to have a relationship with her.
On the other hand, I was less sold on Katie. Probably because romance by deceit is one of my least favorite tropes. And Katie just isn't fully honest with Eric. She comes sort of clean, but even as she's claiming to "love" him, she's still not being completely honest with him. Part of it is immaturity. Part of it is that Katie is just kind of shallow. She uses sex constantly to distract Eric from being mad at her. I totally understood why after two weeks Katie would be in love with Eric. I understood less why Eric would be in love with her. She gets caught being less than honest, he spends a lot of time admiring her "bravery" which to me seemed alot more like Katie backed into a corner and having to come clean. I don't know, I just...didn't buy them living happily ever after. Why would he tie himself to a woman who he knows is a liar? Especially when he's running for office? I just didn't buy it,
All of that being said, I find Dimon's writing to be really engaging. She writes smart dialogue and her sex scenes are hot and earthy. She wrote a couple of secondary characters who I really liked. I think more than anything, the premise of this book didn't really work for me. But I'd definitely give HelenKay Dimon's writing another chance, with a book with a difference premise.
Final grade: B-/C+





